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“Oh YES!!!” Joseph screamed out loud when he heard that he had been just like his best friend John, the day before his birthday! Suddenly he was running around the classroom giving yelps of happiness. He suddenly stopped in front of the whiteboard and written the date, time, and address to his birthday party saying, “Whoever is not invited to my birthday party, you are now! Please come, .” Hearing this John ran to tell Joseph about this but he was too late, the bell had already rung, so John just continued class per normal At the end of school, John followed Joseph to Johns home to help him get ready. While they were walking home, John told Joseph the whole story. When Joseph heard this he screamed into the heavens and said, “When I see that guy, he is going to pay a visit to my fists. John heard that, and immediately stopped him, “you can get back at him later, at the party. So here’s what we’re going to do……” At the party, when Joseph was opening his presents, Ali was walking towards Joseph and John was in front of him, making the present box open on the laps of the strongest boy in class. The trap activated and the bomb exploded on the laps of the strongest boy in class. Blue slime covered his entire face. He stood up and cracked his fingers, crack crack. Ali was very scared but still managed to mutter Bish! Bam! Pow! After Ali was hit three times on the face he ran out of the house and went home sobbing. “Hi-five! Pay back dude.” From that day forth, Ali stopped being the class clown and stopped disturbing others ever again.
 * John overheard Ali talking to Mark outside the classroom during recess. Curious, John went closer to listen to what they were saying. He overheard; “I have a plan to play the funniest prank on Ali on his birthday I need your help. and to buy me some blue slime. Bring me the blue slime later after school at you-know-where” Oh no! Joseph is going to get pranked!

Comments by Ken Zho:

I dont really understand your compo...You never mentioned anything about the strongest boy in class (unless that is Joseph). the payback was a little mean.

Comments by Bryan Bob: I dun really understand ur compo n it has a abrupt ending. You could have put in a part where what happen to Ali after getting attack.